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joemartins says

Hello guys!
This is my item for the contest. :D
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Thankyou.

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joemartins says

Perhaps try some nice, hand written looking style fonts ??? http://www.dafont.com/contribute.font or http://www.dafont.com/orial.font

etc….overall it looks nice though, just that font change part could get it accepted :)

and a big suggestion…lately there’s been some ripping going on the Marketplace, whre one user steals others idea, and it gets approved etc…I highly suggest you watermark your logo, there are too many experienced designers here, who can easily, copy that idea, and submit it as their own.

Thankyou for the advice. I’ll prepare it.

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joemartins says

Do you have any suggestions?

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joemartins says

Hello everyone.
Yesterday I sent this logo for sale:

Unfortunately, this file was rejected. This was the reason given by the reviewer:
“The overall aesthetics of the design could be improved with a font that’s better suited to the concept and refining the shape of the image.”
Can you guys can help me to improve this file?
Thankyou :grin:

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joemartins says

Well… I agree with the guys here.
The design is too simple and the curves need a little more work. I think it don’t look like a liquid shape.
Try to add some details on it.
Good luck.

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joemartins says

I think that this gradient is polluting the symbol.
Try to remove it. :grin:

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joemartins says

Well…
I think the design are fine. But Graphicriver is full of those kind of flyers, and some with better quality. You should try do something a little different, something new.
Just what I think, don’t get me wrong.
Good luck!
:grin:

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joemartins says

I think you still have a problem with colors and perspective.
Try to scketch this briefcase in various positions to understand a little more about it.
Good luck! :grin:

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joemartins says

I think your files are not specific.
I mean, there’s too much of those on the marketplace. You should get them unique.
And it seems like they’re not of the same group. The colors seems to be randomly picked.
Take a look on the files in marketplace of this category to understand more what I am trying to say.
Hope I’ve helped.
Good luck! :grin:

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joemartins says

Well.. I think badhon answered everything.
Your idea is cool, but it needs more details.
Maybe something on the edges and some texture could help.
You’re also should take a time to consider the usage of colors.
Good luck. :grin:

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