2nd rejection - need any help

Hi. The second time rejected template and did not provide specific information so I want to listen to your feedback. My site

I’m sorry but the earlier review stands. I’m not seeing sufficient improvements here. Your template does not provide a unique enough design with the necessary design quality, features and options to compete in the marketplace at this time. As higher quality templates become available in the marketplace, approval requirements will increase to maintain appropriate marketplace quality.

thanks in advance

asterun said
Hi. The second time rejected template and did not provide specific information so I want to listen to your feedback. My site

I’m sorry but the earlier review stands. I’m not seeing sufficient improvements here. Your template does not provide a unique enough design with the necessary design quality, features and options to compete in the marketplace at this time. As higher quality templates become available in the marketplace, approval requirements will increase to maintain appropriate marketplace quality.

thanks in advance

What was the first comments? Same?

Hey

It’s cool but you have to put some more content into it. I think it is just too simple as it is.

Also graphics could use some improvement.

Cheers

Lester

It’s a really nice design but for what I see the turn.js can’t be used in any commercial work…

And its to cramped up, it needs more spacings. And i don’t really dig the tipo.

geceolurken said

asterun said
Hi. The second time rejected template and did not provide specific information so I want to listen to your feedback. My site

I’m sorry but the earlier review stands. I’m not seeing sufficient improvements here. Your template does not provide a unique enough design with the necessary design quality, features and options to compete in the marketplace at this time. As higher quality templates become available in the marketplace, approval requirements will increase to maintain appropriate marketplace quality.

thanks in advance

What was the first comments? Same?

This template is not ready for ThemeForest. Your template does not provide a unique enough design with the necessary design quality, features and options to compete in the marketplace at this time. It requires improvements in term of design, visual hierarchy, typography, layout and its aesthetic quality but most importantly, its uniqueness and how the design is executed.

At this stage in the design I am, unfortunately, not able to provide more specific feedback other than what I’ve stated above (the design needs overall, general improvements). With further improvements I may be able to provide more specific feedback.

mafloral said
Hey

It’s cool but you have to put some more content into it. I think it is just too simple as it is.

Also graphics could use some improvement.

Cheers

Lester

Thank you very much for your advice

The_Silverman said
It’s a really nice design but for what I see the turn.js can’t be used in any commercial work…

I give only a template for turn.js