Feedback needed , Please, Thanks

Any constructive opinion very much appreciated, even harsh ones, Thanks

Hello Amrhamza, I am truly seeing your skills improve with ever submission you do! This looks great and you have a great start, i would mention where it says, ‘A Spooky music night’ It blends into the background in parts so not sure how this would affect print, but overall a brilliant start my friend!

Hi,

Your skills have really improved! The only thing for me is that if it’s a Halloween spooky music night, this flyer doesn’t look spooky at all, more like stylish, so the concept needs to be revisited. Also, it’s Sponsors, not Sponsers.

Keep it up!

i thank you all for your support,

@expressivemedia thanks alot buddy, i will see what can i do about the phrase

@ loreleyyy thanks alot, i will fix the word, regarding spookey its more like a catch prhase.

I don’t think the style fits though for halloween, it looks more like a normal disco night. Halloween designs normally go crazy with the horror and “scary” imagery, that’s the fun of halloween Since you’ve got autumn leaves, it could maybe work as an “autumn party”.

ToivoMedia said
I don’t think the style fits though for halloween, it looks more like a normal disco night. Halloween designs normally go crazy with the horror and “scary” imagery, that’s the fun of halloween Since you’ve got autumn leaves, it could maybe work as an “autumn party”.

+1

i agree with your concept but if you look at no2 flyer sales for hallloween its far from scary

well, i will do what you guys suggest, You guys are the experts.