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Flyer rejected :_(

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JarrierModrow says

Hi folks, what the problem with my flyer? It’s my first item on graphicriver.

http://twitpic.com/2w5e39

All text editable, layered, cmyk, bleed margins, organizable items, cool colors. Good aesthetical sense. I only used Arial font to make it simple.

Why are you so bad ArikB?

But i’ll try to improve it.

My respect.

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topedia says

Tbh it’s kinda boring, it’s only a gradiant with some text and 2 boxes on it. Try look at some of the other flyers here and see how there are compared to yours :) Maybe try making it more exiting and eye caching.

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JarrierModrow says
Tbh it’s kinda boring, it’s only a gradiant with some text and 2 boxes on it. Try look at some of the other flyers here and see how there are compared to yours :) Maybe try making it more exiting and eye caching.

The flyer have background pixels like space who don’t appear in this low res jpg. Yeah man, I was look all flyers on the GR before. It’s a house party, not a psytrance party with psychedelic colors and whatever.

But thank you feedback.

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biyopsi says

Try to add a beautiful bg. And change these fonts and styles. They’re boring.

Don’t be mad at me. But it is.

Good luck.

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JarrierModrow says
Try to add a beautiful bg. And change these fonts and styles. They’re boring.

Don’t be mad at me. But it is.

Good luck.

Thanks, man.

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d97 says
Try to add a beautiful bg. And change these fonts and styles. They’re boring.

Don’t be mad at me. But it is.

Good luck.

+1 more exclusivity

gl.

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IncredibleWand says

Hello Jarrier, i think this isn’t only about the background, you have to improve your typography as well (font, size, effects, alignment). And you should add more decorative elements also.

Hope you accept my opinion.

Here is a file that will make you understand : http://graphicriver.net/item/myflyer-party-celebration-flyer/122625

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