Hi, Need Feedback please on my new item....

First…Hi

now lets talk first the social icons part, you need to redesign that is to cramped. the scanlines are to hard, it gives me an oldish feeling the pattern in the middle also. In this par twere the quote is u need more spacing. and the font itself just for me doesnt go with all the rest.

icons are cool but the texts need more spacing alltogether beatwen the icons , tittle, text and button to.

I don’t gettit with the wrapping text around the images, i would never use that. the prices parts to need more spacing and a bit more details again those price fonts just doesnt go.

more spacing between main tittles and the content. Use some images in last projects and again read more button is to close.

arrows need a bit more work, to “high, a bit noobish”

again footer with the scanlines and you need more spacing here.

the heading tittle fonts overall just dont work for me and in footer they need more spacing. And again the social icons to cramped

you need some more improvements on other pages as well.

Hope i helped at all

gl

Ohh very well ! thank you Anps, I have already submitted my template but if unfortunately it would be rejected, I will try to follow your advices