My First Design | TF Reviewer will approve it?

Friend from last so many weeks i am working on my first template design whould you like to comment on my first template design for TF. http://themeforest.webdesignerart.com/html/honeybee/index_bright.html

You have a lot of nice stuff going on….very clean.

I think it is looking a little cramped; it needs more whitespace between the elements, such as in the right column. Looks the theme Classica, great use of whitespace.

The body text could be increased slightly, seems a tad too small.

I meant look at the theme Classica

I saw the classica template looks nice it was made by omclark so what do you mean regarding white space between the elelments and in right side. can’t clear.

You wont get this approved. Here are some things youll need to improve.

Remove the top strip.

Reduce the noise on the background.

Update the logo with modern trends.

Change the menu font & style.

Increase padding of elements.

Get rid of the icons and use some with more quality.

There is no styling of forms.

Footer has no defined font and the color makes it impossible to read.

Theres no consistent use of fonts.

Ok all your points are valuable too me, yes i m not satisfiy with my design but now with TF authors suggestion i ll make more unique. thankx

Nice work friend….make the change mentioned above… Good luck