plz help me with improvement on my new business card

here is

Too simple, no point i got it from this BC… Work again for Typography, Font choice, why i tell you like this, when you got rejected, reviewer will say what i say, not really same, but the point is make a unique design, and choose the best color… But, nice try… Good Luck, share something or update your BC, i will help you soon…

This just needs a lot of work my friend.

Try to think about the shapes, colors, font & execution a bit more.

Please do not upload this, as it will never get approved looking the way it does now.

Good luck and keep on improving your skills.

In design less is more.

It’s a good effort, you’ve thought about it somewhat, but unfortunately the executions isn’t there!

The background needs work. It’s sort of blurry and mismatched, make it cleaner and more consistent (remove those random translucent words)

The text needs to be simpler and laid out better.

As @SinestesiaDesign pointed out, less is more, but make sure if you go less, your design is unique as there are too many ‘Simple Business Cards’